On stopping in to comment on Chapter 7, I realized that I never officially commented on Chapter 6. Bad, bad beta.
I loved Breda and Havoc's opening action scene. It was just perfect: the snark, the camaraderie, the appreciation of the goods and how the good's appreciation could not be fully appreciated (Vanessa/Havoc, in case that was confusing).
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Date: 2010-05-08 11:40 pm (UTC)I loved Breda and Havoc's opening action scene. It was just perfect: the snark, the camaraderie, the appreciation of the goods and how the good's appreciation could not be fully appreciated (Vanessa/Havoc, in case that was confusing).