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2011-07-12 04:32 pm (UTC)
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I finally started reading this. I've had the page open for days and days and days. I'm not kidding. Just so I wouldn't forget I wanted to read it.
I did find what might be a whoopsie in this chapter. Ok here it is:
in the first graph, you mention that,
[Al] had the windows open, blowing a breeze all the way through the little apartment he shared with Ed...
Then a few graphs later. (the fourth I think,) You have Al open a window to wave the ozone smell out.
Other than that this is going swimmingly. ^_^ I loved the ultimate solution Al came up with that Ed discovered after it's installation.^_^
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Date: 2011-07-12 04:32 pm (UTC)I did find what might be a whoopsie in this chapter. Ok here it is:
in the first graph, you mention that, [Al] had the windows open, blowing a breeze all the way through the little apartment he shared with Ed...
Then a few graphs later. (the fourth I think,) You have Al open a window to wave the ozone smell out.
Other than that this is going swimmingly. ^_^ I loved the ultimate solution Al came up with that Ed discovered after it's installation.^_^